5 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2011-05-22 02:21:36Wow, some of the more painful writing I’ve muddled through. 5 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2011-05-22 02:21:36Wow, some of the more painful writing I’ve muddled through. Hentai drag it out more. The story has potential, but the spelling, grammar, and technical details were horrendous and ought to be checked before publishing.anonymous readerReport 2011-05-12 10:28:23IJWTS wow! it has potential«1» The story has potential, but the spelling, grammar, and technical details were horrendous and ought to be checked before publishing.anonymous readerReport 2011-05-12 10:28:23IJWTS wow! Why can’t I think of tinhgs like that?anonymous readerReport 2011-04-20 00:41:18He rammed ur ass then immediately came. … The story has potential, but the spelling, grammar, and technical details were horrendous and ought to be checked before publishing.anonymous readerReport 2011-05-12 10:28:23IJWTS wow! to the author i would advise reading over what you write and making sure it sounds right and try to add more to the sex…
