12 comments«123»Anonymous readerReport 2010-07-30 11:36:27Poorly written due to the text talk such as “Omg”. Anime porn You rushed it. also try not to use computer talk such as “omg”READERReport 2005-07-27 19:23:02Chris why are you reading a story marked gay, rape and boy if you don’t like gay stuf f and gross are you saying people never leave the house for more tanh 1 1/2 hours, and is says fiction why you read this if you don’t like rape fantasy. Not enough details. and thats all it is Fantasy. Not enough details. and thats all it is Fantasy. good story«123» You rushed it. Not enough details. The storyline was nice but like I said not enough details.Anonymous readerReport 2008-08-01 03:29:44awsome story 10/10READERReport 2007-09-28 00:14:32cool he should have cryed and begged more but very goodREADERReport 2005-09-12 00:32:29it was an “okay” story, if it was longer it would have been better and i know
