there are way to many STUPID ERRORS and the plot sucks. it was way to unrealistic and just plain awful plus hard to read. Anime Much obliged.anonymous readerReport 2011-01-02 23:52:08long stories r nice. it was way to unrealistic and just plain awful plus hard to read. and to the person below me: learn proper capitalization, punctuation and sentence structure.anonymous readerReport 2010-10-01 20:50:47way to unrealistic in the begining he talks about how uncomfortable he is around her because of how she dresses yet you expect us to believe they end up fucking no way he would go out of his way to avoid her even if he had to get up before her and not get home til bed time and when he was home he would be locked in his room keep it atleast sounding somewhat realistic please«12345»
