Everything sounded good until the Chase character ended up being a sadistic rapist and killer. Anime Even though it didn’t have any sex it in it, it was still extremely good! 6.5/10READERReport 2007-02-17 01:36:06There is such a thing as a spell checker…USE IT!!! Kill the rapist and maybe find some string of a clue to her mother. It could be a lot better. Keep it up and please continueREADERReport 2007-02-17 06:05:20Let’s face it, and I’m not being mean to the author: This is a very average story. You’re doing good. Keep it up and please continueREADERReport 2007-02-17 06:05:20Let’s face it, and I’m not being mean to the author: This is a very average story. And to the commenter named Zatch2, it’s not “Definatley, it’s “Definitely.” Learn how to spell before sounding like a writers critic.READERReport 2007-02-17 04:33:43Definatley needs a conclusion.
