You left some great possibilities open for a second chapter. Remember that it is always easier for people to criticize and insult than to actually work and (god forbid) think. Anime Thanks.«1» Please follow up with another story. First, run your story past one of the volunteer editors to refine the grammar, spelling and punctuation. grammar was atrocious. Ignore jerk comments. I have two suggestions. Ignore jerk comments. grammar was atrocious. First, run your story past one of the volunteer editors to refine the grammar, spelling and punctuation. First, run your story past one of the volunteer editors to refine the grammar, spelling and punctuation. First, run your story past one of the volunteer editors to refine the grammar, spelling and punctuation.
