Grammar is pretty bad as well.READERReport 2007-12-04 02:57:24what’s with the fucking “bitch” calling thing?«12» Fuck your stories are terrible.READERReport 2007-12-04 22:28:44good concept. This story is one the best here on this si…Yeah, I don’t think so.No one doesThis guy is a dumb fuckReport 2008-07-13 16:58:02It was the worse story ever retard, wasn’t long enough didn’t make any sense, what haven’t you had a english class before, you dumb retard!!!!Stop writting stories cause you can’t tell a good story -1/10READERReport 2007-12-14 18:51:57What a surprise.. Anime 9 comments«12»anonymous readerReport 2012-05-23 19:22:51WOW! Need major proof reading. One second he is in her ass next her cunt, then her ass. horrible exicution. Grammar is pretty bad as well.READERReport 2007-12-04 02:57:24what’s with the fucking “bitch” calling thing?«12» He ended up with Melinda.
