It would be a fun read. You’re a very talented story teller and you really should think of doing a book on this story line. Anime Looking forward to the next chapter.«1» Keep it up.anonymous readerReport 2013-10-26 23:24:46Very good story glad you went back to it. Just slow it down and use a bit more dialog as well, and you got it. I’ve only found one mistake ant that was in the start of six but that is the only one to date. I’ve only found one mistake ant that was in the start of six but that is the only one to date. It would be a fun read. I’ve only found one mistake ant that was in the start of six but that is the only one to date. Just slow it down and use a bit more dialog as well, and you got
